Hey Zake, do you mind if I give a constructive criticism?
Well,
first of all, congratulations. You're making some NCT updated tutorials that perhaps will help some new guys when the official game arrives.
Second, I think your topics, this one mainly, need to be a little more fetching.. You know, it has a lot of cool info, but it looks like one info have been thrown over another.. :?
I think you should put some spaces between paragraphs and add more colors, so the reading won't be boring. Btw, sort by topics would be great too. (more than 3)
Like the
"BEGGINING YOUR JOURNEY" wich can be detached in more topics.. Like "How to train your starter" or "what starter should i pick?" and things like that..
Third, it's more an advice than anything. Improve your english. I can understand what you write, but I think if you get some classes it'll make your topics look waaaaay better
I guess that's all, keep moving forward and getting better and better.. perhaps some day you'll get what you want. (or not haha, who knows? :lol
Also, I hope you're not a Brazilian who doesn't know what a constructive criticism is. Not being racist, I'm a brazilian and I know how some of us are about being criticized :roll:
Regards.
