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Great work, really... But... isn't that a little too long?
Well, maybe I just feel that way...
 

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Great work, really... But... isn't that a little too long?
Well, maybe I just feel that way...

Yes, a little! In my opinion too, dont worry. But i show it when have +-4 minutes and ppl said that should be this, and this and this, and this, and blablabla! And when i added trailer, have 6 minutes ;x I know, that will be hard to watch... but if new player want to see game maybe isnt bad :p
 

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Very nice job, I loved the video
I just noticed some grammar mistakes and it would be PERFECT if you can change that to make it a little more "formal"

2:01 - "Legend Pokes Raids" change to "Legendary Pokemon raids!"
3:47 - "Use special stones to evolution your pokemons" change "evolution" for "evolve"
3:54 - "Rare candy system Lvl-up your pokes fastest" change "fastest" to "faster"

Also I would change everytime it says "Pokes" to "pokemons" xD just my idea to make it perfect, it is awesome anyways
 

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Yeah it's kinda too long, but we had to show as many things as we can, and you can always skip some minutes :).
About english mistakes, Santo is nab xD, but seriously, it's not a big deal, but ofc possible to fix.
 

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Nice :>
I'll try to put this video in some OT games, they have a part to other games so i will post this video :>
Nice Lajrra and Santoo :>
 
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